Semi-ok
The sound quality is horrible (mainly for piano), and it just does the same thing the entire time, no variations. I do like the chord prog though. The guitar at 0:55 should be turned down a bit.
BTW, this is probably a form of techno, but it doesn't really have a style (it sounds a bit like toddler music at the beginning lol)
Yeah it does kind of sound like kiddy music at the start, lol.
Were gonna work on it, thanx for the advice.
Very good.
A few things:
You may want to use a (quiet) pad at some points at the beginning.
It's extremely repetitive, it would be better if the theme varied a bit instead of the same one again and again.
Pretty ok
I like the main melody, but the pitch shifted part is a bit odd.
Try to use a less complicated drum beat at the beginning. You also may want to use a pad at some points to make it more interesting.
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right...
This is more like lounge jazz than trance.
probably, i just wanted to submit this this to newgrounds quickly.
Alright.
It's okay, but a better drumbeat would help. Another thing would be to complicate it a bit (add more tracks/parts), and to get into the melody faster to get the listener interested
You made this on Logic 8? I recognize some Apple Loops.
Great.
This is more like trance than techno.
One thing: turn down the volume of the poly synth a tiny bit at 1:50.
Very good.
Just one thing, the sound quality at some points is bad, mainly the piano.
I like the chord progression a lot, and the pause at around 00:50 was very good.
OK..
Wayyy to repetitive but whatever.
You may want to add a few *lot of* parts to it, and Change The Drumbeat!
Very Good.
I like everything, but you maybe overdid it a bit with the distortion.
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